Friday, October 3, 2014

Peer Review

Maggie T.- I liked how you started out your short story and the way it was structured. I found it comical and well thought out.

Nicole L.- Your short story really kept me involved and wanting to know what was going to happen, there was good use of imagery and descriptions.

Sean I.- Your writings are very comical, and I like how you seem to be writing as if you are talking to someone in person

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